Morning,
As you probably know already I have a raw unadulterated draft of Phoebe’s Performance available on Wattpad: https://www.wattpad.com/311846542-pho…
I’ve updated this draft at home, trying to make the writing and style much more compelling. I have a new and improved version on my laptop but alas it’s not yet on Wattpad. This is partially because I’m still waiting for professional feedback from the Romance Authors Association – before I further enhance the manuscript. There are no major changes to the plot – just tweaks to make the story better!
For those of you who have read Phoebe’s Performance as it is – in its raw form where I still find grammatical mistakes and spelling errors – thank you for persisting with my novel with all its flaws. Your comments and participation have helped me so much – so thanks.
If anyone has any expectations for the sequel – I’m currently drafting the sequel – feel free to shout them out and I’ll see what I can do.
Also generally, I wondered what readers felt about Dirk because his role steps up in book 2…do you love him?
Or do you hate him?
Or do you simply wish he were Otto?
Please don’t hesitate to ever get in touch either directly here or fb. Or you can email me directly: alicia@aliciamkaye.com
Love to hear more from you!
Have a great weekend where ever you are in the world.
xxx
Oh my god! I just finished reading Sophie’s Performance and it is soo good! I cried for Phoebe when she finally talked to Ben and i cried again when Otto didnt trust her about the news on symphony orchestra. Cant wait for your sequel.
Dirk seems to scream trouble though. I dont know if i like him with Phoebe. I just hope he doesnt toy with her. Will there be much of Otto in the sequel? Im disappointed and pissed that he told Phoebe to go and then messages her not to leave.
Anyway, thank you for sharing the story on wattpad.
Oh my god! Is there any way i can edit My previous comment? I wrote Sophie instead of Phoebe!!!! This is embarrassing!